geometry w***e

i hate geometry

oh geometry,

your such a w***e,

why must you be,

such a bore?

droning on, day after day,

numbers, shapes, triangles and spheres,

why do we need this, by the way?

you make us snore, 

your such a chore,

why must you torture us,

oh stupid geometry w***e???

Reviews

[C.C. Marx]

Yikes, suffered my way through enough proofs and theorems to understand your pain haha

[Suavis_Umbra]

a very nice beat to it , you can almost hear a tune behind it all, Entertaining and funny. Umbra

[KillerWithWords]

Clever rhyming.
However there is no meter in this poem.
An ambitious try...
An easy read, you might want to place the rhyming so your poem reads.
rhyme
non rhyme
rhyme
non rhyme

Additionally try to see if the poem flows.
Your 3 parts flow within each own but together, they do not harmonize.
I am interested to see what your next poem looks like. Feel free to send me a read invite on the next poem you post!

[Carrie]

Interesting. The rhyme scheme is a little rusty, but the sentiment is still there. I wonder... do you dislike geometry? =D