The Family Flower

As a flower wilts a family grows.

At one time full of life

Bloody petals all five

 

Time flies one dives

Hundred suns another gone

Hours creep one more leaps

Just two; what do we do?

Author's Note

Be Gentle!!!

Reviews

[Joe Heath]

Stunningly written!
I have interpreted this as a family in life and death, deaths plural
Am I correct or is there more to this?

[Eugene Finley]

Thank you. I always choose to let the reader interpret the poetry as someone listening to music will interpret the song - so - you're absolutely correct.

[niya]

a very well described pattern of life.