Whatever

Whatever

A Poem by Bryän

Whatever.
Life has become digital.
Prescription drugs make life cyclical.
Whatever.

My friends are made of plasma,
linked in this electric miasma.
Whatever.

Imagination's dated;
by liquid crystal, decimated.
Whatever.

We're a dull orb, I won't deny,
suspended in another sky.
Whatever.

© 2013 Bryän


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I have always enjoyed listening to and reading things where the speaker is detached, and this takes it to another level. When you use this type of voice to communicate, some thing strange has the tendency to occur: the reader becomes attached.

Posted 11 Years Ago


whatever.....we have to go ahead but don't have to conform......WHATEVER......Loved this

Posted 11 Years Ago


Excellent rhyming! :) I really like "Imagination's dated; by liquid crystal, decimated."

Posted 11 Years Ago


Masterfully crafted!! Your structure, flow and rhyming are exceptional, along with your well developed lines.

"Whatever.
Life has become digital.
Prescription drugs make life cyclical.
Whatever."


Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on September 30, 2013
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Tags: whatever, anesthetized, bleakness, social, commentary, rhyming, attempts

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Bryän
Bryän

Germantown, WI



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Hey, I'm Brian. Just a guy that enjoys playing bass, singing, composing, and of course writing. I started writing at the age of 12 after realizing I couldn't stop thinking about a certain dream I had.. more..

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