TrueLove

Not a poem, but there was no Type for this lol

A few fights here and there, but you learn to cope with it and relize that when you fight, your love just grows stronger.That special someone might say something that you don't agree with and you think you hate them, but then when you make up [[and out :D]] your love is just stronger then it has ever been before. Love grows stronger and as does the relationship. And the one point in time when you can just look into that person's eyes and relize that you're looking into a paradise of beauty, you then relize that, that person means more then the world to you, then you relize that you want to spend the rest of your life with that one person. Your heart beats faster and faster, and you can't find words to say, when words can't explain how much you feel about that one person and then, that's when you know that your love is true. But if you don't get that feeling in your heart, in the pit of your stomach, your love isn't there yet. <3

Author's Note

I know, it sucks. But I like it, do you?

Reviews

[Adrian K. Smith]

I admit to reading this, perhaps a little detached at first. I hate to say, that I was ready to label it as cute. The way you ended it though, changed my mind. Instead of just saying that if it is not these things, then it is not love; you say that it is not there yet. For that, this piece offers a great insight and a bit of true wisdom. It made me rethink the path there, and instead of seeing it as cute - I saw it as friendly.

[Marina]

This was good.

Good job.

It kinda reminded me of this quote:

"You Know You're in Love When You Can't Fall Asleep Because Reality Is Finally Better than Your Dreams."
-Dr.Seuss

Again, great job.

XxStaySweet,
Rina