Detoxification

Describes the feelings of a confused soul trying to apprehend the actions of the past and scared for the unforeseen ones.

Wherever I go,
A seed I sow,
What is the fear?
Is it the thought of end coming near?

I looked around,
But I am tangled and wound,
These thoughts make a hollow me,
Ever pondered, is us the same we?

I tried to understand,
How to unite the receding sand,
To apprehend what was going on,
I had to reach where it was born.

I was scared of looking back,
Where to search in the stack?
I closed my eyes,
The thought was scarier to see how time flies.

I felt the pain,
I didn't know whether it was a boon or a bane,
My inner me was buried in grave,
It recurrently said, "I am afraid."

Could I ever overpower them and declare my win?
Was getting into this so bad of a sin?
I deeply sighed continuing to give it a thought.
These non-ending thoughts won't ever end with a dot.

Author's Note

Feel every word while reading. It carries a lot of emotions.

Reviews

[Kevin Andros]

First of all, welcome to this wonderful world of WC!

Great write and seems right away that you carry a lot of potential and markings of a great writer. The poem as a whole tells a deep, layered story which can be felt by the delivery of every words. The imagery is apparent as is use of metaphors - both are done very cleverly.

Rhymes are really great and makes a great read.

Looking forward for reading more and more great peices from you in future!

Best,
~KA~

[Fieora Andros]

Thankyou so much! I look forward to more of your reviews. :')
I will definately post more.

[Ayesha]

Wow. This is clever. It does carry a lot of emotions.
"Ever pondered, is us the same we?" This gave me chills.
Please keep on writing and sharing your work.

[Fieora Andros]

I am so glad that you liked it. Thankyou so much!
Love your reviews. :')

[Ayesha]

Welcome 🙂

[light and ashes]

Unfortunately, I know this place too well.....
I have spent a lot of time living in it.
You expressed these feelings well.

[Fieora Andros]

Thankyou so much. I look forward to more of your reviews. :')

[light and ashes]

Sure :) you're welcome