Let Me Serve You

I want to serve you
not as a servant to her Master
but to a lover to whom she loves

Let me serve you
as you lay down on silken sheets
in a scented room of passionflower

You deserve me serving you
as you watch my deliberate movement
showing all the care I can pour into it

In serving you
I will massage away the tightened muscle
to be replaced by my complete devotion

Love will serve you
these gentle lips upon your skin
where planted kisses softly rest

Author's Note

Take the first word from all stanzas and receive a statement.

Reviews

[Twilight]

Interestingly, instead of the stereotypical idea of a woman wanting to be completely subjegated by a "master"; it suggests an alternative that such service (love) needs to be earned. In other words, it has an important condition to be complied with by the man; or else the woman would not feel strongly enough to "serve" her master? That important condition seems to be, feeling real love for the guy. In a poetic way, the writer states that she would give "complete devotion"; in return. This is demonstrated by a number of romantic acts, by which she would prove her devotion through physical acts (including passionate ones); rather than mere words. I got the impression that this woman knows what she wants and needs from a man, but would only serve one who seems to deserve it.

[Fia Naturie]

Thank you for your comment. She is willing to serve her master if she feels strongly for him, so you are correct. To be in service willing is different than to be ordered to do so.

[Twilight]

OK. I remain open to receiving "read requests" too.

[John the Baptist]

I must admit I got rather turned on reading this one. I get the picture of one who, once she commits, goes all out for the object of her love. I think it would be very easy to become accustomed to such devotion.

[Fia Naturie]

Thank you. Appreciate that you enjoyed the read

[Thomas W Case]

Tremendous. Powerful imagery and painting of the scene.

[Fia Naturie]

Thank you,Thomas

[Twilight]

Yes, he obviously left such a detailed and insightful review; eh lol.