Sweet Tooth

I never considered myself as having a sweet tooth    
if my coffee is too sweet      
I pour it out    
if the frosting of a cake is too sweet    
 I push it aside    
Even if the fruit is too ripe      
I will not take a bite    
     
Then you came along my views changed    
My thoughts converted to all sorts of delectable delights    
     
I wondered how your lips would taste    
After you ate that grape    
How your skin would taste    
With that shimmery hue    
Making me wonder if it tastes like honey on you    
     
Where did you come from?    
That you tempt me so.    
I am very kept and well-controlled    
With one taste, I know I will shatter    
Like glass on concrete, everywhere I will scatter    
     
I decided if I have a taste of you  
It will be decided  
You are my sweet tooth  
I will no longer fight

Reviews

[Arundass TP]

A different poem discussing sweetness. Nicely written

[Fia Naturie]

Thank you Tp for the comment.

[Relic]

Infatuation is a really good feeling when you can get it. Like being high almost just recognizing what another can do to our mood.

Nicely done, Fia.

[Fia Naturie]

Thank you. appreciate your comments

[Green]

This was very sweet (it was but also I couldn't help saying that, it just fits the theme too well). I like that it used a bunch of very unique examples to show the beginning of a crush or falling in love. Very well done, I enjoyed it.

[Fia Naturie]

Thank you, Green for commenting