Stars Write

I love writing, posting and getting responses. Also, to give it in return. I am also on starsrite. a new site;))

If stars could write, I wonder what they would say.

Would it float there and dream of yesterday's

would it mark down the seconds that you came into being

Or did it marvel at the oceans and the seas it has seen

 

If stars can write, would it be in a flurry

With swoops of decadent loops written down in a hurry

Would it try to get each and every word out before it flickers

Would you know if the star can get it all down any quicker

 

If you were the star in the sky, we see

What would you write and convey to me

Would it be of love or of loss

Would it be of deception at any cost

 

I am but one of the stars up above

They cannot retain what I need to say

in words that I love.

So, I will return home, which is called

Starsrite.

If you look into the sky

You will see that I am the first one out tonight.

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Lovely. I can see you are certainly a rising star. I enjoyed the read. My favorite bit of literature on stars is the short story by Charles Dicken's "A Child's Dream of a Star" but it makes me cry every time I read it. It's sad and beautiful at the same time, something only a writer of Dicken's talent could bring off. I enjoyed your poem.

[Fia Naturie]

Thank you so much for that.

[Arundass TP]

The poem holds your creative talent. Looks touching to me. Enjoyed well.

[Fia Naturie]

Thank you for commenting

[Sami Khalil]

A good title and poem; you ask pertinent questions while looking for answers.

[Fia Naturie]

Thank you. I appreciate your comments

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.

[Davidgeo]

There is an old video about space/time that I think might interest you. It's called Powers of Ten and I believe it's from 1977 but it still does the job quite well.... here... have a link directly to it ---> www.youtube.com/watch?v=0fKBhvDjuy0

[Fia Naturie]

I watched the youtube video. very interesting. Thank you

[Abhilash Hegde]

I like the idea about imagining if Stars could write and what would they write and express. This is such a thoughtful and cute poem. Thank you for writing and sharing.

[Fia Naturie]

Thank you for commenting