Tell me the Reason that I trust you.

Tell me the Reason that I trust you.

A Poem by Fen Dukes
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This is my first poem here.

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Tell me the reason
should i trust you,
tell me why
should i miss you

You have always been kind
but never ruled my mind.
Always showed a strange smile
not once you talked for a while.

Ignorance is what you had done
never talked about me
but killing my heart
like a bullet from a gun.

Rumours which you sprinkled
and everything so,
I never thought a single
for you.

You broked my faith
never before a think
Give me a reason
that in trust of your's I sink.

-Fen Dukes

© 2017 Fen Dukes


Author's Note

Fen Dukes
ignore if any mistakes..

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I like the opening stanza. It grabs one's attention with simple but heartfelt questions. Trust isn't easy to find when it's been broken before. Wonderful job :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That's pretty good man! I like the message!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Fen Dukes
Fen Dukes

Silvassa, Christian, India



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Hello,my name is fenil patel.Fen Dukes is my pen name.I am 17 and i started writing at age of 16. more..