Because your not pretty enough, Because your not straight, Because your slower, Because your short, Because your tall, Because your abused, Because your fat, Because your to Thin, Because you are you, Because they are cruel, You are bullied, But it's not long until you never have to see them again, so why end your life now, why waist potential, why end it because of the max 18 years of your life, have not been kind to you, when you could have 100 plus years alive, and well, I don't see the reason anymore, I used to feel how you feel, I used to want to give up, I used to want to end it all, But I wont let them win, Why let them win, when they have been nothing but cruel to you, Why, they don't deserve to win, So don't let them, you are stronger than that, you are beautiful to someone, you are perfect for someone, you will someday find friends, weather their more friends than you have now or your very first friend, you are important, you do have a impact, you don't need to say goodbye to life, because you felt, Worthless.
"Why let them win
when they have been nothing but cruel to you
Why, they don't deserve to win"
Those three lines are the most powerful part of this peice of ink in my opinion. They are the heart of walking a path that isn't down troddin upon can lead to joy rather than shadows. It has been remembering to never let them win that has kept me sane all these years and kept me moving forward rather than two steps back.
This is my favorite piece out of the poetry you have posted. I like all of your work because they show an honesty to the emotional sparks point of view. While I may not relate to everything. I can feel them in how you've put them together.
Thanks for sharing your poetic ink. =)
Aaron - Wolfwind
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank You! I'm glad you enjoyed my piece of poetry :D
"Why let them win
when they have been nothing but cruel to you
Why, they don't deserve to win"
Those three lines are the most powerful part of this peice of ink in my opinion. They are the heart of walking a path that isn't down troddin upon can lead to joy rather than shadows. It has been remembering to never let them win that has kept me sane all these years and kept me moving forward rather than two steps back.
This is my favorite piece out of the poetry you have posted. I like all of your work because they show an honesty to the emotional sparks point of view. While I may not relate to everything. I can feel them in how you've put them together.
Thanks for sharing your poetic ink. =)
Aaron - Wolfwind
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank You! I'm glad you enjoyed my piece of poetry :D
My real name isn't Skylar but I've always dreamed of having that name.
I deal with two parts of my mind
one which wants to be happy
and the other which I show most on here that wants to kill hersel.. more..