Him

Him

A Poem by Feather_Poet_11

You confuse me with your signals
You confuse me with your moods
I love it when you laugh
And hate it when you brood

My heart leaps when you smile
And when your name is on my chat
My heart leaps when you say hello
And poke me in the back

I love the little quirks you have
And the ways you always help
All the presents you give me
Are put up on my shelf

I love how you're friendly
And know just the thing the say
You never hurt anyone
And I love the way you seize the day

But I hate the way you flirt
With every girl that may come by
I hate the way you don't focus
And the way you make me sigh

All in all, with all of your quirks
I love being near you
And I love how it just works

© 2011 Feather_Poet_11


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Feather_Poet_11
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Very catching, and nicely put together. Good job on capturing the feel and swing of someone's actions, while at the same time describing how it affects another.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

thank you :]

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

GREAT GREAT GREAT!!!! :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Put the word "the" in And know just thing the say other than that GREAT JOB!!!! :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I recently took an interest to poetry and fanfiction. I have been writing for a long time; I enjoy writing realistic fiction. I love reading romance stories. more..

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