Stalking Summer

Stalking Summer

A Poem by nicolas taylor carlin

I stalk the summer

To watch time go by

As I come to a stop I realize

That what I am following isn't true

Its make believe and so are you

You lie and fight with me

Everyday I can't seem to win

So I walk away

You cry and scream

Tearing at the seams of your reality

You want me back you say

Well I gave up now go away

Go stalk the summer somewhere else

You w***e go f**k someone else

You punched and beat me

With your fists and mind

You traumatized me

Till the end of time

You took my heart and

Ripped it apart

Taking it away from

Someone who might need it one day

Now I understand

You didn't love me at all

You took my hand and

Asked me to fall

I am done with you

And everything you are

Now go away because

Summer is no more

© 2015 nicolas taylor carlin


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Love this! it's my favourite of all your poems! Dark and mature subject choice and the way you tie in summer is great! My favourite line is by far
'Now I understand
You didn't love me at all
You took my hand and
Asked me to fall'
Just beautiful! How did ypu come up with this?!


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nicolas taylor carlin

9 Years Ago

Thank you I really like this one too and I was in a difficult relationship that after I had to end i.. read more



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Pretty cool the way you develop the metaphor, "stalking the summer"... summer not usually seen as the time of a break up.. I've enjoyed all the poems you've added...
~~redzone

Posted 9 Years Ago


nicolas taylor carlin

9 Years Ago

Thank you popopp
Love this! it's my favourite of all your poems! Dark and mature subject choice and the way you tie in summer is great! My favourite line is by far
'Now I understand
You didn't love me at all
You took my hand and
Asked me to fall'
Just beautiful! How did ypu come up with this?!


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nicolas taylor carlin

9 Years Ago

Thank you I really like this one too and I was in a difficult relationship that after I had to end i.. read more

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Added on May 5, 2015
Last Updated on May 5, 2015
Tags: love, heartbroken, fear, summer

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nicolas taylor carlin
nicolas taylor carlin

reading, PA



About
I am nick I kinda just started poetry so I wanted to explore the other writers around the world i am only 16 still so I hope I can provide good poems for the public eye to see more..

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