Dried Tears And Lost Friends

Dried Tears And Lost Friends

A Poem by Fear Love
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Quick poem.

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Still trapped inside your own heart, what's beautiful? What's worth your time?
Still naive to all the fake smiles, How many stabs will you're back find?
No place for you to hide away, Do the drugs only delay the pain?
Still wonder why they tuned away, Did they really take everything?
Can't remember her warmth, Only a confession and a winter breeze.
Can't remember him being there, Just a fragile woman always half asleep.
Cant breath without regretting, And yet the eyes never stopped staring.
Suicide won't change a thing, Still alone, maybe not as cold..
There's truth in lies you've never seen, The rabbit hole comes with a tole.
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© 2013 Fear Love


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Fear Love
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It's nice has a lot of potential, although you could have gone a little deeper with how you're feeling, how it feels every time to get stabbed. Don't be afraid, good writing always comes from the inspiration of past expieriances.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Fear Love

11 Years Ago

Well thanks, there' alot of meaning behind every line actually. But maybe people can take it how the.. read more

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Added on December 3, 2013
Last Updated on December 11, 2013
Tags: Poem, Depression, Fear Love, Rabbit hole, Sad, Poetry, Love

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A Poem by Fear Love