Vent

I needed to vent out some of the things i've been feeling

In the broken home of my life bearer

I feel the tensity we have together

My lost emotions in my supposed sanctuary 

Never truly having any boundary

Bottling up my hurt in a box

Locking it and placing the key in my heart

The key is lost with the turn of the clock

With my tears I want life to restart

Sometimes I think I should ask for help

My soul left dull from time itself

Should of kept your prayers close to me

Maybe then my soul could of been set free

Writing down my pain helps me the most

Completing a part of me I have lost

My father telling me their only notes

Shunning me he is truly my cross

Hoping one day my art will be loved

Likely to be forgotten simply by a shove

Author's Note

Constructive Criticism would be appreciated

Reviews

[Kiari Sabon]

nice write

[Kenneth The Poet]

A cool write I think. It may be clich'ed or whatever, but it's your heart on your sleeve. Write what you feel, and see if matters. The rhymes are good, the rhythm is okay and the message is straightforward. I like that kind of work. Keep it up.