The Turns And Strolls

My perspective on life.

"The Turns And Strolls" By Fabian Franco

The sharp turns of life is only a phase.

It ends abrupt or just fades.

Yet the strolls of the actions done are boisterous.

But it well be forgotten, recycled for the generations to come.

Some will be remembered, most will be forgotten.

Let's spend the time we have with some gratitude.

For we are merely flickering candles.

Destined to burn out eventually.

Author's Note

Like a reviewer once said on another one of my works it's a little cliche.
Hopefully I'll be better in the future.

Reviews

[Aven]

you are excused for using a cliché, as long as it's intentional and well carried out. :)

[No use.]

the disintegration of "us"
this is reality.
i took a look at your note, if you want to edit it in the long run, don't change the ending!

[Vanna Renee]

Hmm I don't know what it is about this writing,
But it makes me think of the seasons.
The first two lines fall,
second winter,
third spring,
and fourth summer.
I like this

[Ruth]

So true, but does the flame ever go out?
A thought provoking poem hon, love it!
xx

[Miss Coral]

Personally, I really liked it.. the topic was kind of a cliche, but it was executed with originality.
I think that the last couplet could be one sentence, separated by a comma rather than a period. And I love the second to last stanza. :)

Great write. c:

-Coral-

[Adelia Alighieri]

I like the structure, suits pretty well with the thought. Greatly done.

[vincentbals]

Great poem... good thoughts.

I also like the image, I believe it's from Alex Pardee?

[mmzx]

true!
very nicely done.
(:

[Chris Barker]

This is a great piece of work! I especially love this line:
"Some will be remembered, most will be forgotten.
Let's spend the time we have with some gratitude."
It's what I try to do each and every single day! Keep up the great work man!

[Candylove.]

This is a smart poem; an intelligent, insightful read! Well done; this is great! :)