Vivid Captivation.

I wrote this song not so long ago.

"Vivid Captivation" by Fabian Franco

How does it feel when you live by the coast and look among the horizon.

And how does it feel when everything you want comes in golden boxes.

Do you know how it's like on the outside world from your crystal glasswalls.

How does the salty ocean breeze feel on your delicate skin so soft.

(2x)|I call for you for you at nights latest ends for so long.

    

Oh my insomnia takes it's toll every passing moment within these paper walls.

This valley is killing me burning me down with such ambition.

I feel like I'm wasting my time in this corrupt town of mine.

Oh how I envy you so much please take me with you.

(2x)|I call for you for you at nights latest ends for so long.

    

Oh this shadows sickness is in my lungs.

It envelopes within me.

And I can feel it shifting places in my head.

I can feel it in my eyes closing indefinitely.

Author's Note

I wrote this song envying someone that lives by the coast. A place where I wanna live. To get away from this town.

Reviews

[Aven]

I feel your yearning to get out... freedom is what we all want. :)

[dangerbooze]

I'd love to live on the coast too. Writing about envy like this is a very satisfying read. Makes me want to jump into my boyfriend's car and demand we go there now.

[loowzerX]

i hear ya :)

[Miss Coral]

Great write.. I'd add in some punctuation in the lines, just for reading, but otherwise, great job. Great imagery.
I can totally imagine this as a song, which is often difficult for me.

-Coral-

[Chris Barker]

This is a great song you wrote. I don't know why I but I imagine someone like Killswitch Engage performing this. Anyways great write and keep up the great work!

[kawaiiLovely]

I can imagine this playing on the radio. Seriously. Now all I want to hear, is the beat to the words :]