Alone

A lovers touch is all i wish
From the depths of my black soul
Someone to catch when i fall
And miss me when im gone
Someone to hold this bloody hand
And to help me stand up strong.
Someone i know will have my back
And whom i cant trust compleatly
But here i stand
A traveler lone, amidst the sand
With no one there to guide me.

Reviews

[Norah]

Like the simplicity of it,
yet it grabs the reader and involves him/her.

[TeArra Beautiful]

I love this poem I wrote a poem similar to this so deep and I love the flow too.

[Angel of the devil]

this is a beautiful poem. beautiful and sad. i like it