Patrol.

Patrol.

A Poem by Fay Slimm

 

 

Patrol.

 

Elderly faces wet as brown pebbles

parade local streets,

pacing patiently, come wind or rain

toward flat beaches

jackets held tightly to capped heads,

wellied legs leading pets 

struggle to see that walks be taken.   

Backs bent, bags ready,

to be disposed in appropriate bins.       

Others passing en route       

exchange nods through the drizzle.

Bedraggled but usually  

dog-loving wags  know that despite

weather, taking air

daily with canines tends to provide 

chances for sharing.    

Normal life with four-pawed friends

highlights people prone       

to like causes for outings,  instead      

of staying at home.

 

Hail to the army of all-weather folk

         facing the dog yarns of owner-patrol.          

         

© 2020 Fay Slimm


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.... Tis a dogs life for sure... where would we be without them eh' .. and more to the point, what would we do ....... perfectly captured and true :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Fay Slimm

4 Years Ago

Yes I agree that a dog can make life complete for those coping with age and aloneness - bless you N.. read more
Wonderfully rhythmic and as graphic as can be, Faye. Your accompanying picture and the quite brief lines flow so smoothly... this really is an incredible post. Take care, keep safe. Must sleep, find you another time. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Fay Slimm

4 Years Ago

Grateful thank yous dear emma for stopping by and reviewing my take on Patrol - - sleep well and ke.. read more
emmajoy

4 Years Ago

Just read your words again..and i can feel them even more. Smiling in your direction. xr

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Fay Slimm
Fay Slimm

Camborne, Cornwall, United Kingdom



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Hi from Fay Slimm, I have been writing poetry since childhood and have always enjoyed writing nature poems along with romantic odes to the glorious place where I live alongside the sea in Cornwall U.. more..

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