Enticing.

Enticing.

A Poem by Fay Slimm

 

 

Enticing.

 

From the first finger of hazy light
fresh rays from
day's entrance shatter dark chains

impeccably.

 

Breeze stirs black dregs to a finish
as streaks of
morning beget break of new dawn

impressively.

 

Unsullied azure displays an astute
need for space 
by removing glimpsed bits of grey

imposingly.

 

Sleep flits away, giving me chance
for early  
attempt to pen nature's clear gifts

impassively.

 

Caught in night's shawl is no place
to be when
sun's call entices me outdoors so

impellingly.

© 2020 Fay Slimm


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love how you ended each stanza...impetuously importing impish humor but with immense imprint on the mind of the reader. :)))) Cleverly conceived.
j.

Posted 4 Years Ago



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Fay Slimm
Fay Slimm

Camborne, Cornwall, United Kingdom



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