Over ?

 

 

Over ?

 

Keening, she leaned.

Head on his chest.

For sure it is over.

No more dreaming.

 

Tears shed aplenty.

Naught to be said.

When love loses hold

trust sinks between.

 

Deceit confessed.

Why now feel thrown ?

Eye to eye ventured.

Appeal takes hold.

 

Lips lift and open

a whispered entreaty.

"We still can together

reinvent peace"

Reviews

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

I love your lines here, Fay.
No matter what happens, no matter the turbulence that stand between them, if it's true love, they'll always overcome. Because, the power of love overcome almost everything.
So, it should never be over until it's over-over.

[Fay Slimm]

Absolutely my friend - love is a powerful force and can overcome any challenge.

[Neville]

Its not over until the fat lady sings..... You have crafted a little belter here Fay.... dunno why I suddenly felt a pang of guilt...

Neville

[Fay Slimm]

Ah thanks my friend - - thought I would have a stab at your style and format - it finished not too bad - but a pang of guilt eh ? - well if the cap fits. !! (only jokin' o'course) ....... mucho etc..... Fay

[Neville]

the devil is in the detail.. and of course, a gentleman never tells... :)

[Fay Slimm]

Quite right too... fully agree secrets need keeping . :)

[Neville]

absolutely true...