Shall We ?

 

 

SHALL WE ?.

 

We lived through a blaze of debate-soaked relationship
mindless of Hearing's real worth.

We blithely argued ideas as winner-related bias created
pretentiously led Self-talk.

We fell into shut-eye's mess of raking up any dissension 
and blindly besting with words.

We rankled ourselves toward barren ground and Regret
denied, Ego raised storm-force.

 

Tho' love's ultimate non-sound got somehow mislaid lost
sight relates to quiet heard.

Shall we reconstruct silence and give Us a reminder that
minds can speak without a word ?

 

Reviews

[Neville]

Oh’ how I envy your pen and your keyboard.. Like the late great L.N Cohen wrote.... ‘and her fingers, like a weavers, quick and cool’

Neville

[Fay Slimm]

Nah - you don't envy Nev - you really encourage and praise other quillings - and my ! what an honour to be likened to Cohen's quite famous "fingers" description - - I thank you humbly dear friend and am delighted you like my scribblings.