Inside Me.

Inside Me.

A Poem by Fay Slimm

 

Inside Me..

Substance of rock remembers its core.
Change comes slowly but granite recalls.
With unending patience boulder's vibrations
yield to year's grind of out-facing each storm.

 

There is rock inside me which apes stone.
Same cycles of stasis show mind's vital role. 
By veering courageously toward perseverance    
    I shall gain more endurance and betrayal control.  

© 2019 Fay Slimm


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It seems that you, like so many others have been hurt my friend.. I do hope that was a long time ago now and since then, you have moved forward... I think it is amazing what holds us together in times of adversity and loss and totally get your analogy of a rock which apes stone...

I know you to be a kind and caring soul to others.. maybe at the detriment even to yourself and suspect you may be seen as a rock by those who love you.... a well crafted poem and true... N

Posted 5 Years Ago


Fay Slimm

5 Years Ago

Real gratitude for this perceptive comment my friend........ those long-ago lessons remain close as.. read more
Neville

5 Years Ago

coz ya worth it .... and coz its my pleasure... Neville

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Fay Slimm
Fay Slimm

Camborne, Cornwall, United Kingdom



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