Inside

Whispers patter here and there,
be afraid, be aware.
Running through a tunnel of dreams,
you shall find, nothing is as it seems.
feel the fire breathe the smoke,
taste the blood, begin to choke.

When you dream,
when you sleep,
be afraid,
as the darkness creeps.

See the light,
run for hope.
begin your journey,
then run out of rope.
There we are, here we come,
you cant hide, there is no where to run.

We are you illusion,
your imagery come real.
We are your darkness,
your pole and you reel.

Twisted,
cracked,
crushed,
and sacked.

We have you now,
while you sleep.
you cant escape us now,
for we are what dreams you make.

We haunt you in your own mind,
you chain us up, in hope to not find.
But you can not escape what you are,
for we are never to far.  

Reviews

[Kruppz]

What is it about? Is it about the inner demons? I like your work. It invokes fear.

[Larry Dyson]

idea good.. run on sentences ..not flowing or matched to the meter of your writing...idea is there just the choice of words is too long. misspellings a lot..plurals and singulars are not matched..LIKE

We have you now,
while you sleep.
you won't escape us,
for we are your dreamings.

[Black]

We are you illusion,

isnt it
We are your illusion? ... otherwise i dont get that sentence,

your imagery come real.
and comes instead of come? ?
if it isnt like that, mind explaining me.,.. i just wanna help
no critizism.....
and of course the ... cant... are can't
right??...
further i love it..
how you capture the emotion..
without hope..
that you run for every sparkle of love, or hope, or good times,
but you never catch it..
you never escape your nightmares.. .the horrors that you lived through...
its mind blowing.. and powerfull..
ty for sharing
ty for the RR i really loved it...
hope i will see you reviewing my work one day :D
i could learn from that :)

[Kenneth The Poet]

Sweet piece of work. Love the rhyme and flow.

[Linear]

Inside dreams we lose our inhibitions, shake off the mortal beings we are, if perchance we are caught by nightmares who bind us to their delight, well that's just the flip side of dreams. Enjoyed. :0)

[Dewella~Vintella]

All I can say is that I loved it. Wonderfully written and hauntingly beautiful.

Vinny~