Stuck Together

Stuck Together

A Poem by fawnavalentine

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Endless letters

A wet parade
Of a drawn-out winter

Kissing is for sharp-together
Lovers thin, and justified

And your tongue
Into my side
Don't speak of love
But make me sigh

© 2011 fawnavalentine


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very nice, its short, sharp and thought provoking. nicely done :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


beautifully written. (:
i like all the words you used. they flow so nicely. (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice efforts..!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I enjoyed reading this piece (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


This poem is okay. It's not one of my favorites but I still liked it. Good job and if you don't mind I want to add you as a friend so I can see more of your work abd hopefully you can see some o f mine

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love this. I was scrolling down the page as I was reading it, keen to every word of it. And as it ended, I felt like it had struck me in a way. I rather like how short it was. There could have been more behind the story, more things said that you didn't share. But I'd rather it have been done this way. Short and simple, yet alluring. Very well done. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Such a beautiful way to write lust and desire in a poem without being forceful about it. Wonderfully written, you truly have a talent!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I really liked this piece Its very well written and almost has a gentle feel to it like its calmly written very well done

Posted 13 Years Ago


"Don't speak of love but make me sigh", love that line, very provocative


Posted 13 Years Ago


cool work here, this was surely very interesting writing. i agree wholeheartedly, that last stanza was the best here. great work!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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