take your time (Sotd)

take your time (Sotd)

A Poem by Al

take your time

I don't know if you were looking at me or not
You probably smile like that all the time
And i dont mean to bother you but
I couldn't just walk by
And not say hi

And i know your name
'cause everybody in here knows your name
And you're not looking for anything right now
So I don't wanna come on strong 
But don't get me wrong 

Your eyes are so intimidating 
My heart is pounding but
It's just a conversation 
No boy, I am not a waisted 
You don't know me
I don't know you but I want to

I don't wanna steal your freedom 
I don't wanna change your mind
I don't have to make you love me
I just wanna take your time

I don't wanna wreck your Friday
I ain't gonna waste my lines
I don't have to take your heart 
I just wanna take your time

© 2015 Al


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Very nice flow of thoughts and words.
"I don't wanna wreck your Friday
I ain't gonna waste my lines
I don't have to take your heart
I just wanna take your time"
Good energy and drive in the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Al

9 Years Ago

Oh hey thanks For these nice comment. Glad you enjoy my word

Al
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

I did and you are welcome.



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I don't have to make you love me
I don't wanna wreck your Friday...

The above two lines that I loved by the side of your whole poetry make me loving you more than ever. Indeed. Your intention `bout love, your feelings `bout wisdom, your love `bout someone, & of course, your faith `bout 'heart' .. everything`s so appreciable. To be honest, this poetry reflects your simplicity that I already love `bout you. Beautiful work as always. Keep it up, Al.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Horizons

9 Years Ago

So, the puzzle says, I know what you already know means, I inhale you through winds, cause, you make.. read more
Al

9 Years Ago

Even the clouds got your love, even the universe belongs to you, even my woof woof got you, I'd like.. read more
Horizons

9 Years Ago

Impressive. Appreciate it. I`ll eat you soon.. if I get the chance to.
Very nice flow of thoughts and words.
"I don't wanna wreck your Friday
I ain't gonna waste my lines
I don't have to take your heart
I just wanna take your time"
Good energy and drive in the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Al

9 Years Ago

Oh hey thanks For these nice comment. Glad you enjoy my word

Al
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

I did and you are welcome.

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Al
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Oxford, United Kingdom



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