me?!

me?!

A Poem by Al

"me?!"

I try so hard to get everything what I want
I learn more about it
know how much it will gonna have been 
Your sorrow bring me back 

The first time it immediately rushed 
Away from where I am 
Finding the right one 
For the purpose of life 

Has been more important things 
To see the world attached me
Just now but will not change 
My mind is blow-up 

First time it takes 
To get through to the best price 
in each affairs below to find out 
Last longer than the silence life 

© 2015 Al


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Here, you express the shades of your heartaches, & pain to this page with much emotions. Well dear, the love leaves scars upon your spirit that wanders along time across the life, though the love also brings you much memories either which remind you the past-time where you`ve been once a time. And, when you look over at such things and remind that oh.. the pain`s left in past with past, then you come to know, the meaning of life & starts valuing the love with peace and happiness. Very deep poetry you`ve come up with. I`m sure, this write has arrived from the shells of your wounded heart to this page... with much heartfelt emotions. Keep writing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Al

9 Years Ago

You. Always getting me to what I've done, each words each day each nights .ily!
I liked the way you started it off.
The third stanza is very well written.
I enjoyed the read.

armin. ...


Posted 9 Years Ago


Al

9 Years Ago

Oh hey thanks Armin!

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Added on March 15, 2015
Last Updated on March 16, 2015
Tags: Life, world, ways, poetry, sorrow

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Al
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Oxford, United Kingdom



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