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A Poem by Al

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All I want is to see the world with my eyes
All I learn is the best way to get through my future 
I couldn't resize how it would be
Don't even know how to act
This insane world gives us everything after we're suffered 
Dramatic effect All Over Humans Life 
Some people comes and walked away
Getting closer but falling 
What about me?!
I am on my way

© 2015 Al


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Of course, you're always on the way.
Nicely written. People come in your life and then walk off the doorway of it.. with time. What just left behind is their memories. They impact each `n every persona with their memories.

The story-line you've come up with is appreciable and well related to life that`s meant to be lived, dreamed, & forgotten. Either you ignore people who enter your life or let your feet walk along with them, the time`ll never be stopped for you not even for them as well. So, enjoy the time the life has brought to you with much pleasure and peace off happiness. Excellent write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Al

9 Years Ago

Thanks! What a breeze day



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If i interpret correctly, you express the beauty and challenge that is life, you then tell of the difficulties that steal friends and loved ones from us, ("some people comes and walked away - Getting closer but falling") and then ending on the hopeful note you say you are not one to give up on your friends. ("i am on my way") or maybe i am way off? an interesting puzzle! thank you!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Of course, you're always on the way.
Nicely written. People come in your life and then walk off the doorway of it.. with time. What just left behind is their memories. They impact each `n every persona with their memories.

The story-line you've come up with is appreciable and well related to life that`s meant to be lived, dreamed, & forgotten. Either you ignore people who enter your life or let your feet walk along with them, the time`ll never be stopped for you not even for them as well. So, enjoy the time the life has brought to you with much pleasure and peace off happiness. Excellent write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This comment has been deleted by the poster.
Al

9 Years Ago

Thanks! What a breeze day

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Added on March 14, 2015
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Al
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Oxford, United Kingdom



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