Its just a test

Anxiety takes over her mind
Heartbeats going stronger
She's going blind

Heartbeats go stronger inside her head
Her hands are shaking
She came at her adge

Her hands shake to the rithm of her heart
She's paranoid
She's going mad

She sighs, admits that the painkiller won't work
The pensil on her mouth
'Wake up, Fate, it's not a fork!!!"

And then the monsters appear from a place
That she created
For these moments

Her heart will propably jump out of her chest
Then that known, annoying voice
"Calm down, Fate! It's just a test"

Reviews

[poetic soul]

ahh!!! the toughest thing said in sucha simple way....jus a test....but we all know how hard it is to pass it or even stand still while it takes its toll....full of positive energy and hope! i liked this verse!

:) Smiles,
Poetic Soul

P.S. jus an observation, red is a very bold colour, use a lil soothing colour, it all definitely add to the beauty of the poem!