With Me

With Me

A Poem by Fat

 

Let’s make this a habit
every night,
every day -
sing to me.
Make room in
your dress,
dance with me.
A collarbone
kiss,
stay with me.
Where have you been
all these nights
all these days?
In my thoughts
I wait for you
to sing,
to dance,
to stay.
Your days pass by
without me
by your side.

© 2009 Fat


Author's Note

Fat
Be cruel.

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good job. all these peoples reviews sound the same, but hey it is very true you did a wonderful job!
The length was very short, but the poem itself was good.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is awesome, well expressed, and I liked the flow. "Collarbone kiss".............I loved that!

Posted 15 Years Ago


I really like this poem. Even though it does not rhyme, its got a certain pace to it that makes it flow just as well as if it did. WONDERFUL JOB!!!!!!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Fat
Fat

Sarajevo, Bosnia and Herzegovina



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