'Bout This S**t, You Put Me Through (LyriCs)

"Raging feelings of BREAKUP"

It's 3am in the morning

I'm wide awake and alone,

writin' some freaking love song

'bout you my feelings,

finding some cure, some healings,

for this s**t you put me through

Now I don't know what to do-o-o (Do-o-o)

(Chorus)

I guess my love was too much for you,

that you couldn't handle it

You ran away, feels like I already knew

You left me alone with this s**t

What would've happened if you loved me back?

I even begged for heaven's sake

Now lets see, what I do

'Bout this s**t you put me through (Oh-O-Ohoo-Oh)

Yeah I've said many times that I'm alright,

Believe me deep inside loneliness frights

Come on, you used to say "Baby I love the love we share"

Now it seems like you don't even care

Not even once you show,

your love for me (Oh-Huh)

But thanks for letting me know,

that action speaks louder than the sugar coated words like yours

(Oh sugar coated words like yours)

(Chorus)

I guess my love was too much for you,

that you couldn't handle it

You ran away, feels like I already knew

You left me alone with this s**t

What would've happened if you loved me back?

I even begged for heaven's sake

Now lets see, what I do

'Bout this s**t you put me through (Oh-O-Ohoo-Oh)

(Raping)

I'm breathing but I'm dead inside

Oh! these feelings now I can't hide

Now I see one thing's for sure,

you are my one'n'only cure

I've cried, I lied, I tried

EVERYTHING!

To get over you

You don't even have a freaking clue

You hurt me to the core,

I still love you for sure

'Cause if I didn't, I wouldn't be writin' this song

My raging feelings on this page,

You should set up a stage

'Cause I'm writin' a playwright for our love story

Lets see how many will feel sorry,

FOR ME!

Oh-Oh-Oh

Now lets see what I do,

'bout this s**t you put me through

I loved You,

I really did

You walked away

and said I went astray

from the promises

we made

I'm gonna be strong now,

I'll make your mouth say 'WOW'

When you look at me

All happy

Now lets see,

what I do 'bout this s**t

that U put me through

This s**t you put me through (Oho-Oh-oH)

'Bout this s**t you put me through

(HUH)

Author's Note

I've never written something like this before. But I hope U guys will like it!

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Was suggested to come and review this, so, here i am and willingly. After all lyrics are poetry and supposed to tell stories and touch moods and spirits, hearts and minds, etc. etc.

And you certainly do and have.. no doubt about that. This is jam-packed ful with rage, angst, broken heart and more.. and it just flies. However... i think just two swear words would be enough. Why muck up your talent with words with muck and mud. You obviously have great skills with emotion and vocabulary.. walk free of what people think is necessary these days.. tis not. You're worth more.

All in all I'll buy you when on the way up.. and, you could be!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Oh! Indeed overload of raging emotions..! The heart break, the heart ache, the helplessness, the emptiness.. So very well conveyed..!
Kudos!

[Destiny Dreamer]

Hehe Thanks :)) I am very glad U liked it. Once again THANKS for checking it out!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

You are welcome! :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

So damn well expressed! its a powerful punch in the face, considering that I've read all those lovely writes you put up here. BUT! i like it very much. This song got a one way ticket to my top list. (Adding to my favorites) 100 points.

[Destiny Dreamer]

Haha Yeah, you are right! Thanks A lot it means A lot to me. I am really very much glad that U liked it. I was a little insecure about my this write because of the few bad words :D
But THANKS A LOT for liking it :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

You are soooo welcome :) lol. :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

And hell...use whatever words you need... Cuz we must express what we have inside...and sometimes we need such words too.

[Destiny Dreamer]

YUP ... Right! Writer shouldn't be shy or ashamed of expressing His/Her's feelings :) ^_^

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Exactly. So write on :)