'Bout This S**t, You Put Me Through (LyriCs)

"Raging feelings of BREAKUP"

It's 3am in the morning

I'm wide awake and alone,

writin' some freaking love song

'bout you my feelings,

finding some cure, some healings,

for this s**t you put me through

Now I don't know what to do-o-o (Do-o-o)

(Chorus)

I guess my love was too much for you,

that you couldn't handle it

You ran away, feels like I already knew

You left me alone with this s**t

What would've happened if you loved me back?

I even begged for heaven's sake

Now lets see, what I do

'Bout this s**t you put me through (Oh-O-Ohoo-Oh)

Yeah I've said many times that I'm alright,

Believe me deep inside loneliness frights

Come on, you used to say "Baby I love the love we share"

Now it seems like you don't even care

Not even once you show,

your love for me (Oh-Huh)

But thanks for letting me know,

that action speaks louder than the sugar coated words like yours

(Oh sugar coated words like yours)

(Chorus)

I guess my love was too much for you,

that you couldn't handle it

You ran away, feels like I already knew

You left me alone with this s**t

What would've happened if you loved me back?

I even begged for heaven's sake

Now lets see, what I do

'Bout this s**t you put me through (Oh-O-Ohoo-Oh)

(Raping)

I'm breathing but I'm dead inside

Oh! these feelings now I can't hide

Now I see one thing's for sure,

you are my one'n'only cure

I've cried, I lied, I tried

EVERYTHING!

To get over you

You don't even have a freaking clue

You hurt me to the core,

I still love you for sure

'Cause if I didn't, I wouldn't be writin' this song

My raging feelings on this page,

You should set up a stage

'Cause I'm writin' a playwright for our love story

Lets see how many will feel sorry,

FOR ME!

Oh-Oh-Oh

Now lets see what I do,

'bout this s**t you put me through

I loved You,

I really did

You walked away

and said I went astray

from the promises

we made

I'm gonna be strong now,

I'll make your mouth say 'WOW'

When you look at me

All happy

Now lets see,

what I do 'bout this s**t

that U put me through

This s**t you put me through (Oho-Oh-oH)

'Bout this s**t you put me through

(HUH)

Author's Note

I've never written something like this before. But I hope U guys will like it!

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Was suggested to come and review this, so, here i am and willingly. After all lyrics are poetry and supposed to tell stories and touch moods and spirits, hearts and minds, etc. etc.

And you certainly do and have.. no doubt about that. This is jam-packed ful with rage, angst, broken heart and more.. and it just flies. However... i think just two swear words would be enough. Why muck up your talent with words with muck and mud. You obviously have great skills with emotion and vocabulary.. walk free of what people think is necessary these days.. tis not. You're worth more.

All in all I'll buy you when on the way up.. and, you could be!

[Robot House]

So angsty! :) Love the tone

[E G TEN]

Cool song Dream,, Just love the Raping part, I was like daaammnn!
In all honesty you have a natural flow, and a lyricist to boot, well done!

[Amber Lily]

I. Loved. This!!! One of the best ways, in my opinion, to write is with angry positivity. You get that intense feeling along with over coming your challenges in life. An awesome piece from you :)

[Rajat malik]

I really van't understand how you end up while mqtching the lyrics of this song. I know it must have been hard but you know what, The words made me feel like Reality though I think it shouldn't happen in real life. Feels Sorry if it did.

[Destiny Dreamer]

Hehe :D Yeah it really SHOULDN'T. But this is LIFE! :P

[Rajat malik]

Yeah.....rightly so.....
Maybe the best answer anyone can give.....
'This is Life'

[AaronFreitas]

I do like it... it's definitely different from you but I do enjoy the creativity and the ability to expand and do something totally different and kind of rebellious :) Awesome work Dreamer :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

Yeah it is :D Thanks A lot ^_^

[Willard Wells]

Kick her to the curb and move on. Nice work. I have tin ear so the song does not sound as good in my head as I am sure it sounds in yours.

[Destiny Dreamer]

Thanks A lot ... It means A lot! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of words. I did feel the song and I liked the energy and the emotions of the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Destiny Dreamer]

Thanks A lot :) :) :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Farrah]

OMG!!! I will not try to be offensive or anything like that , but I just like to say that you really inspire me!
This piece of poetry is very astonishing !!! Great job ! I really really truly mean it !

[Destiny Dreamer]

No Cutie ... U words are very Encouraging. Thanks A lot for giving me your time. Your review means A lot to me.

[Robert]

You are very talented as I lyricist. There is no way I could produce something like this. Have you thought about showing this and others to some bands in your area? Maybe one can actually sing it.

Check out my new piece "breathe" after I had writers block for a month, haha.

[Destiny Dreamer]

I'd love to check it! Sorry I've been awfully busy! And Thanks a lot Ur reviews means A lot to me. And nope there is no one .. But I'll keep looking. Actually, in our area no one even knows that I am a writer :D
Thanks A lot for checking this out!