First Experience Of Love (Lyrics)

(First Verse)

I got open to my thoughts,

 but my all thoughts were blue,

Oh I realized, I can't live without you! 

Even that I tried, I can't breath without you,

My soul is all empty, I don't have a clue

Its my first time that I've loved somebody

somebody who left me all alone

Now that I see, this love was never true

for if it was, I'd never be Blue

They say love hurts, well now I see

It never always end up with glee

(Chorus) 

Love hurts no doubt, now that I see

Why don't you come back and make it easy

For this is my first experience,

don't make it worse, that I won't be able to love again

I know it isn't sane, I am asking you to come back

But its my first experience, don't make it worse 

Oh my buddy, You'd be cursed

(Second verse)

I thought they are being dramatic, to even admit suicide

Now I know how it feels inside..

Thought they just say "I can't live without you" 

I'd always doubt that this is even true

'cause a person can't live without oxygen in the air

how can one not live without his peers 

I thought they were joking "I'd die without you" 

If you didn't stick to me like a glue

But now I know what I never knew

now I see, how it feels,

but oh with these feelings I can't deal

(Chorus) 

Love hurts no doubt, now that I see

Why don't you come back and make it easy

For this is my first experience,

don't make it worse, that I won't be able to love again

I know it isn't sane, I am asking you to come back

But its my first experience, don't make it worse 

Oh my buddy, You'd be curse

My first experience of love, don't make it worse 

I'd write it down in this verse

Don't make me cry, don't say Good-bye

why did You lied, you could've tried,

 to be someone better for me

Now what can I do for what I saw,

for what I felt in this love, all I'm left is with this pain

I'm hurt enough to never love again

It was my first experience, 

you gave it the worst you can

from your words, you ran away! 

Now my first love experience has gone bad

Now I won't love again, and that's so sad!

'cause my first love experience has gone BAD 

Author's Note

ENJOY! ^_^

Reviews

[Willard Wells]

My opinion, " but my all thoughts were blue," change to "but all my thoughts were blue,".
"It never always end up with glee" to "It never always ends up with glee"
"I thought they are being dramatic" to "I thought they were being dramatic"
"why did You lied, you could've tried," to "why did You lie, you could've tried," I see the word match, but the flow gets lost. Very beautiful piece of work. All opinions are just mine. Any changes or corrections mus make sense to you and feel write. Thank you for sharing your beautiful work.

[Destiny Dreamer]

OH Thank YOU very very much for your HELP! I'll change them ASAP! Thanks once again! :)

[Irenic]

Amazing, romantic and vivid.
love it.
Thanks for sharing.

[Destiny Dreamer]

Aww Thank You ... Thanks A lot Irenic!

[Irenic]

welcome.........................:)

[Mskendra Renee]

Getting me in my feelings lol this is a really nice song. I think you have some creative ways of putting things that I don't see in most love songs :-)

[Destiny Dreamer]

Awww THANK YOU so much. This means A lot to me! :)

[Mskendra Renee]

No problem what's so ever :-)

[AaronFreitas]

Awesome song my friend... love the lyrics. They are lyrics most can relate to :) Good work

[Destiny Dreamer]

Thank YOU so muCh!!! ^_^

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the flow of thoughts and the feel of song.
"Now my first love experience has gone bad
Now I won't love again, and that's so sad!
'cause my first love experience has gone BAD "
When love turn dark. Leave us pissed off and love turned cold. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Destiny Dreamer]

Oh I'm very very GLAD that you did :) THANK YOU SO MUCH!

[Coyote Poetry]

I did and you are welcome.

[ANTO]

There are some good and bad here Dreamer.
I have seen the best of you (so far, I felt) in 'Remember Me' and this seems like a step down or rushed.
"It never always end up" - this for example isnt very lyrical.
I love the premise of the song - once bitten twice shy - and i like the ending - apart from the 'bad' and 'sad' rhyme.

[Destiny Dreamer]

Oh should I change it!? And THANK YOU so much for checking this out! :)

[guy drori]

It is very hard to miss what you are trying to say in this poem for you wrote it in a very clear way yet not entirely straight forward. I liked the way you broke it into verses and a chorus, like a song.

[Destiny Dreamer]

Yup.. 'cause it is LYRICS to a song :D Thank YOU so much for checking this out! THANKS A LOT!

[Anne Verona]

This is a very relateable song to most people. And as I quote from Mitch Albom, "...common sense has no place in first love and never has." And I feel that this song reflects a lot of what that quote says. It really is one of the most exhilarating and terrifying moments when that first surge of true love comes into one's life. And one of the most devastating and devastating when broken after. But that doesn't mean there isn't any hope. Because there always will be :) Anyway, amazing song :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

Yup Exactly! THANK YOU SO MUCH! :) :D

[Anne Verona]

No problem :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Lovely write :) it is relateable, well done :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

Thank YOU so much! :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

You are welcome :)