I Cry In The Rain

It's just prose writing, just go with the flow! :D

I like to dance in the rain,

everyone calls me insane

O what a shame,

Now they are being lame

They don't know I cry in the rain,

and I think it is sane

I cry all my pain away,

'cause I just went astray

I think rain is my best friend,

it hides my tears till the end

It has been doing this, like it's the trend

Like heaven's gift has been send

It hides my emotions,

without any cautions

With tiny drops, which cheers

wash away all of my tears

Author's Note

It just came to my mind, and is prose writing. Hope U'll enjoy! :)

Reviews

[AaronFreitas]

Awesome write Dreamer... I love the way you use rain as a way to cover and hide your feelings. "I like to dance in the rain, everyone calls me insane" Awesome write :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

Thank YOU so much. Rain always light up my mood! :D

[AaronFreitas]

I think I have forgotten what it's like to see rain... I swear it never rains anymore. We are in a huge drought in California :(

[Destiny Dreamer]

OH That's very SAD! :( I myself love raining very much!

[Pratik Mishra]

Very beautiful indeed! You are very talented!

[Destiny Dreamer]

Thank You very much, that is very Encouraging! :)

[Willard Wells]

Beautifully written work. Sadness with a little personal positive spin. Time to yourself to release the pain and reboot. Very nice and thanks,

[Destiny Dreamer]

Thank You so much. Glad U liked it :D

[~]

A fun read even though it was about a sad subject. May he clouds part and sun shine on you. :D

[Destiny Dreamer]

Yeah.. Thank You so much! :*:*:*

[Chirag Kumar]

The coolness of rain wipes one's tears, calms the heart and washes away all the pain within. A beautiful poem Dreamer :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

Yup! That's TRUE! :) Thank You so much!

[B]

I find such peace in this poem
A certain tranquility about the rain
The dance of the rain is so apparent in this write
The relief of pain and worry
All it takes is one nigh in the rain

[Destiny Dreamer]

Exactly dear Friend. Thank You so much :)