You walked away too (Lyrics)

You walked away too (Lyrics)

A Poem by Destiny Dreamer

When the wind blows in my face,
it reminds me of the dreams we chase
Baby, our own world together we had,
now we've broken apart, it's so sad
The darkest hours of my life appeared,
from my life when you disappeared
(Chorus)
I know, I know, I walked away
counting every step that I take
hoping somehow you will stop me
but all you did was watched me go
Don't know whose mistake it was,
don't you dare to blame it on me,
'cause when I walked away,
you walked away too 
I was dying inside,
but you let me go with feelings I hide
I turned my head, my heart broke slowly
when I let your hand, so holy
It's a tragedy, how you let me go
I hurt you too, I know
(Chorus)
I know, I know, I walked away
counting every step that I take
hoping somehow you will stop me
but all you did was watched me go
Don't know whose mistake it was,
don't you dare to blame it on me,
'cause when I walked away,
you walked away too 

You let me go, I let you go
But inside we both were hurt so
You didn't stope, I just walked
with feelings we both inside locked
But don't you dare to blame it on me,
'Cause when I walked away,
You walked away too 

© 2015 Destiny Dreamer


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Destiny Dreamer
I love this lyrics, myself. Hope You guys will like it too!

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dan
A song about love gone bad? Has one like that ever been written before? (I'm just kidding) If it wasn't for love going bad a lot of classic songs may never have been written. This has a bit of a twist because both lovers have walked away at various times...a red flag for a relationship, I'm sure. Very nice song, I'd love to hear it with music and singing. take care...dan

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Destiny Dreamer

9 Years Ago

Haha I thought You didn't liked it, at first. Thank You so much for your amazing and shocking review.. read more



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amazing piece, in a sad way.. I guess he shouldn't have walked away too,
he should've done his best to chase after you.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Destiny Dreamer

9 Years Ago

Thank You so much RichieSam for reviewing! :)
Great sis just improving with every work of yours.
Just keep writing till your last breath
And i will try to read everyone one of them
While counting my last.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Destiny Dreamer

9 Years Ago

Thanks.. Yup I will :)
Definitely lyrics, but very well done with rhyme. You are so very good at that. good job.


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Destiny Dreamer

9 Years Ago

Thank You, Thank You, Thank You so much! :)
Awesome lyrics my friend... always enjoy your work :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Destiny Dreamer

9 Years Ago

Aww Thanks :)
omg i love it so much !!!!!!!!
great job !

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Destiny Dreamer

9 Years Ago

Thanks sweetie, its encouraging! *-*
Breaking up happens for many reasons. some known and some not known. But often both are left empty as they search to find what happened. I feel your loss in this piece and very beautiful. I know your looking for a musician to add the sound. Good luck and thanks,

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Destiny Dreamer

9 Years Ago

Yeah U are right, Thank YOu so much!
Very nice flow of words. I could feel the song in the words. I liked the meaning of the words also. After someone walked away. We are left with emptiness. Thank you for the excellent words.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Destiny Dreamer

9 Years Ago

Yeah True! Thanks A lot dear friend! :)
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome dear Poet.
Very very well written! i can relate in a way...its complicated... But i love this write. Rating 100#

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Destiny Dreamer

9 Years Ago

Thanks dear! :) :) :)
Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Always welcome :)
Ohh! I liked it.....I know the pain when someone goes away from our life.....
it hurts like hell!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Destiny Dreamer

9 Years Ago

Yeah it sure does, Thanks A lot for your review! :)
Rajat malik

9 Years Ago

you are welcome
Destiny Dreamer

9 Years Ago

:) :) :) ^-^

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Added on May 18, 2015
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Destiny Dreamer

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