You walked away too (Lyrics)

You walked away too (Lyrics)

A Poem by Destiny Dreamer

When the wind blows in my face,
it reminds me of the dreams we chase
Baby, our own world together we had,
now we've broken apart, it's so sad
The darkest hours of my life appeared,
from my life when you disappeared
(Chorus)
I know, I know, I walked away
counting every step that I take
hoping somehow you will stop me
but all you did was watched me go
Don't know whose mistake it was,
don't you dare to blame it on me,
'cause when I walked away,
you walked away too 
I was dying inside,
but you let me go with feelings I hide
I turned my head, my heart broke slowly
when I let your hand, so holy
It's a tragedy, how you let me go
I hurt you too, I know
(Chorus)
I know, I know, I walked away
counting every step that I take
hoping somehow you will stop me
but all you did was watched me go
Don't know whose mistake it was,
don't you dare to blame it on me,
'cause when I walked away,
you walked away too 

You let me go, I let you go
But inside we both were hurt so
You didn't stope, I just walked
with feelings we both inside locked
But don't you dare to blame it on me,
'Cause when I walked away,
You walked away too 

© 2015 Destiny Dreamer


Author's Note

Destiny Dreamer
I love this lyrics, myself. Hope You guys will like it too!

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dan
A song about love gone bad? Has one like that ever been written before? (I'm just kidding) If it wasn't for love going bad a lot of classic songs may never have been written. This has a bit of a twist because both lovers have walked away at various times...a red flag for a relationship, I'm sure. Very nice song, I'd love to hear it with music and singing. take care...dan

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Destiny Dreamer

9 Years Ago

Haha I thought You didn't liked it, at first. Thank You so much for your amazing and shocking review.. read more



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Its all about two hearts they met each other & they broke apart. I like the flow and design of your words all throughout

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Destiny Dreamer

9 Years Ago

Yup, you get it right. Thanks A lot dear Friend! :)
Dreamer, your nothing but a Dreamer. From Super Tramp. I'll try and put a link to the song for you at the end. So here we go with grammatical changes for your lovely song.
it remind me of the dreams we chase - Should be - it reminds me of the dreams we chase
but all you did was watching me go - Should be - but all you did was watched me go - because past tense
You didn't stopped, I just walked - should be - You didn't stop, I just walked
Try that and see if you like it better. here is the link to Dreamer - by Supertramp
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uhe6e0dDqs8


Posted 9 Years Ago


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Destiny Dreamer

9 Years Ago

Oh Thank You, ThankYou so much. Your help means a lot to me. Thank You very very much. And WOW! It's.. read more
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dan
A song about love gone bad? Has one like that ever been written before? (I'm just kidding) If it wasn't for love going bad a lot of classic songs may never have been written. This has a bit of a twist because both lovers have walked away at various times...a red flag for a relationship, I'm sure. Very nice song, I'd love to hear it with music and singing. take care...dan

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Destiny Dreamer

9 Years Ago

Haha I thought You didn't liked it, at first. Thank You so much for your amazing and shocking review.. read more
i can relate to this i once let a girl go by mutual consent as i told her she was too much woman for one man lol

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Destiny Dreamer

9 Years Ago

Oww.. I'm glad You can relate to my Lyrics. Thank You so much!
I've tried writing lyrics and I've always found it really difficult, but here you are making it look so easy lol. This is very well written, I loved it :) I hope I hear it on the radio some day! Thanks very much for sharing this with me :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Destiny Dreamer

9 Years Ago

Hahaha :D Thank You very very much. That's encouraging, thanks once again!! :) ^-^
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ohh.. sad but there is poetic lyricism in it! :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Destiny Dreamer

9 Years Ago

Hehe Thanks A lot :)
I don't have anything to say, it has simply left my mind blank.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Destiny Dreamer

9 Years Ago

Oh! In a good way, right? Besides, Thanks :)
Shubham Joshi

9 Years Ago

Of course
Shubham Joshi

9 Years Ago

Of course
This very beautiful and captures what happens when, two that were one, again find themselves as one. And it's a confusing vulnerable time, which I have not felt for an incredibly long time, but it's a feeling you never forget. It's like someone has ripped your heart out and stomped on it, on the floor. And there is just nothing, no nothing but time can heal, if it heals at all, for the lucky ones it does or at least they find a graceful way to live with it. If you'ld like some grammatical help on this let me know, I'm sure English is not your first language. keep inspiring people with your writes.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Destiny Dreamer

9 Years Ago

Yup... feelings which can never be forgotten. Yeah sure, I'd love it if U helped me out. Thank You s.. read more
Sometimes we want the one who professes to love us to follow when we walk away and that works if Love is strong but walk too far after someone and you become the harraser. Then when we stop the following - all of a sudden we 'walked away too'. Thats my take on it.
This reminded me very much of a Holland-Dozier-Holland kind of song
I could hear some of it being spoken-word leading into the song like in the style of Judy Boucher's 'I can't be with you tonight.'
Affecting song. Well written.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Destiny Dreamer

9 Years Ago

Yup absolutely works if love is true. Thank YOU so much! :)
ANTO

9 Years Ago

I love the confidence in your reply Dreamer - for your age I mean - and I dont mean that disparaging.. read more
Destiny Dreamer

9 Years Ago

Hehe LOVE IS LIFE ... And I am always SUPER sure about it!
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A very nice song
It will go so well with a deep tune
Drums and an electric guitar

Very deep and intense

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Destiny Dreamer

9 Years Ago

Aww Thank You so much for Ur encouraging words!!

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Added on May 18, 2015
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