Water (Lyrics)

Lyrics! ;)

WATER

You were my first, my everything

My wish, my dream

D****t d****t, now I scream

You broke my heart, and walked away

You think I'll cry, I'd just die

Oh no my Dear, why'd I lie

I knew You'll leave me

And now I just see

 (Chorus) 

'Cause You are like water, so transparent 

I can see through you

You don't even have a clue

You remember the first time You said I love You

I knew You were lying, Yeah! It's True

You had many things, inside of U

You think I'd never know

Now stop, stop, stop coming in my Dreams

Every time I see You, it makes me wanna scream

You want me back,

You said for heaven's sake

I'd never come back,

No matter what you say, I'll just shake ;) 

You came back to me

You ain't getting that

You made me wait

Now I'll show you the real me

Not polite, not so sweet

Now only in dreams, is where we'll meet

I knew You'll touch my heart and core

I knew You'll find someone, and love her more

(Chorus)

'Cause You are like water, so transparent 

I can see through you

You don't even have a clue

You remember the first time You said I love You

I knew You are lying, It's True

You had many things, inside of U

You think I'd never know

Now stop, stop, stop coming in my Dreams

Every time I see You, it makes me wanna scream

You want me back,

You said for heaven's sake

I'd never come back,

No matter what you say, I'll just shake ;)

In the end, I wanna tell

You were my DREAM, for U I lived

You broke me down

Why'd you do it, why?

You kissed my Heart

For a second, I thought it's true.

But I really really knew, You

Like water I could see through You

Now good-bye forever

We'll never meet, never

'Cause I know Your every move

'Cause You are like water, so transparent to see 

LIKE WATER!

LIKE WATER!

Author's Note

It's just lyrics which came to my mind! Hope You'll enjoy!

Reviews

[Ashwin Thakur]

Love is selfless
"Girl o girl
You have to wait for your turn
Till then you must burn
Grow like a fern
Hold a gun
Shoot your head and have fun"
Its like this but in this poem the girl pounces back
Racy yet emotional
And for the poem theres waaaaaaaohh!!!!!!!!!! :):):).

[Destiny Dreamer]

Thanks A lotttt!! :)

[Ashwin Thakur]

You are always welcome.

[closed]

this is absolutely intense
there's is alot, and I mean alot of anger in this poem...

the emotion here is fantastic
and really brings this to life

stellar

-Dream

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the poetry. Nice flow of thoughts and I liked the use of the repetition. I liked how you defined the water in the poetry. Love that is like water can be different. Pond water and river water are opposites. Pond water people would be happy where they stand. River water never stop moving. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Mayank]

Nice lyrics, it good to penned them. Heart breaking huh!

[Destiny Dreamer]

Yup! Thank You so much! ^_^

[AaronFreitas]

Nice song.... you gonna work on turning it into a record?

[Destiny Dreamer]

Thank You so much! Umm I don't know if I got opportunity! SURE! ^_^

[Lizardo]

I really enjoyed the lyrics, thought they are kind of sad in some parts, in others its like it elevates itself to a more bigger and powerful thing or usage of words. (sorry if that didnt make sense lol)
Great lyrics!

[Destiny Dreamer]

Aw Thank You so much my friend!!!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Awesome!!!
use of water is fantastic.......Bravo!!!
a few mistakes.......but beautiful....
very well written....
i loved it!!!
:)

[Destiny Dreamer]

Thanks A lot! Can You plz point out my mistakes? Please.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

" like water"
"don't even "
"You think I never knew:" or "You think I'd never know"read more" like water"
"don't even "
"You think I never knew:" or "You think I'd never know"
" it makes me wanna"
"In the end, I" or "at last, I" or "lastly, I"
"For a second"
these are just my opinion.......change anything only when you think it needs changing!!!

[Destiny Dreamer]

Yeah SURE!!! Thank U very very very much! I'm gonna change it immediately!!! :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

no problem.......anytime......!!! :) :)

[Shubham Joshi]

Long...but that's not bad... there are mistakes but those can be removed.

[Destiny Dreamer]

Lyrics should be Long a little! And ThankYou! :)

[yvo miki]

wow very good I wish I could write a song like this

[Destiny Dreamer]

Thanks A lot Yvo Miki! It's so NICE of You! :) ^-^

[yvo miki]

lol ur welcome girl

[Willard Wells]

Well that relationship sounds a little rocky. Good words and write. Thanks,

[Destiny Dreamer]

Hehe ThankYOU! :)

[Passengerr]

Two words- 'Beautifully sad'

[Destiny Dreamer]

WOW! That's so DEEP! :)