Beautiful Love Story (Lyrics)

Its something that came to my mind while I was in the Garden on the Rainy Day :)

BEAUTIFUL LOVE STORY

In Her Garden,

Under her favorite Tree

They were sitting, Yeah completely free

 No care of the worries that life brings

It was the season of beautiful Spring

He was holding Her hand

They were no longer just friends

She was staring in His eyes,

and were dreaming in disguise 

Yeah, it's a beautiful, beautiful love story

Not tragic, no worries

No, there is no need for apologies

'cause the stars are shining in their eyes

The wind blowing in their face

The raindrops are making them raise

They've never been so high,

Do they feel like they could fly?

Yeah, it's a beautiful, beautiful love story

He holds Her hand tight,

asking with fright, "How much do You love me?"

She stared at the Rain drops, and asked to Him count

He said, "I can't it's an infinite amount"

She grinned and said, "My love is infinity"

Yeah, infinity, infinity, divinity

He stared in Her eyes, saw dreams in disguise

It's a beautiful, beautiful love story

Not tragic, no worries

No, there is no need for apologies

'cause now they are holding each other's hands

Loving, wishing, dreaming in their own private land

He is singing for Her in a beautiful melody

She is happy 'cause she's found Her love already

They are Dancing in the cool breeze, smelling the Rain

Caring for no one as they strain

It's the most beautiful, beautiful Love story

EVER TOLD! 

Author's Note

I was just holding Pen and Notebook and was sitting in my Garden on the rainy day ... The words and story came to my mind automatically! Hope You will like my first ever lyrics.

Reviews

[Willard Wells]

I am a romantic at heart and you have touched my heart with your words of a beautiful love story. Stepping away from the world around and being in the moment with your one true love. Great work and I look forward to reading more. Since joining here I find I have much less time. Too many great writers and hardly enough time to read and write.

[Destiny Dreamer]

WOW! I am feelings very lucky then! Thanks A LOT!

[Willard Wells]

No luck involved when you provide such beautiful words and verse.

[Destiny Dreamer]

Thank You so much sir once again! Your words are very ENCOURAGING!

[Willard Wells]

While I appreciate the respect and while I realize I am not young. Call me "Will". As has been said before, "Sir was my father name". :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

Oh Oopps SORRY! Not young... Don't care about the age. Age is just a number. It was just for respect! OK Will nice talking to U! :)

[Ashwin Thakur]

Beautiful love story just a boy and a girl loving each other
Love creates just enough jealousy in the world so that people want a taste of love
So you are also now one of the people making the world jealous through your works.

[Destiny Dreamer]

Hehe :D Thank You!

[Kousika]

Hey you are so well in expressing love stories and words yaar.. These are not just words they are love..
I felt like I am watching this story from a garden.. Superb it is..

[Destiny Dreamer]

Awwww Shooo Shweet Thanks A lot. You always encourage me. Don't know why every time I sit to write. It turns out I'm writing about Love again :D

[Kousika]

Mmm ya I too feel the same.. So only I see the contests to write about some diverse thing..
Try this and see..

[Destiny Dreamer]

OH Yeah I will. Thanks for telling :)

[alan peter kelly]

This is a picture of young love...colourful...vibrant...sweet...a canvas rich in bright colours in only the finest oils....an innocence reflecting an age long lost but best remembered when eyes set down on such a write...i very much appreciate the poem in its entirety for i am one such person whose memory you just jogged especially with the word INFINITY...so thank you and i will come read some more at another time :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

OH! That would be very very very KIND of YOU! Thank You so much! It means A LOT!

[alan peter kelly]

It's reciprocal...you are exposing aspects of your creative soul...i show my appreciation through considered review...it will be my pleasure..you are most welcome :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

I would beg You to please read and comment on my new poem "Broken Girl" I wrote it with great efforts. Please, will You? And Thanks You so much!!!

[alan peter kelly]

Of course :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

ThankU ThankU ThankU so much!

[E G TEN]

Nice work Miss D" indeed a love story worth telling,
You can be inspired writing wise in anytime anyplace
Keep writing and keep up the good work;)

[Destiny Dreamer]

WOW! Thank You so much. That is very ENCOURAGING! Thank You

[sinNsincerity]

Really sweet piece hon, gardens can bring so much inspiration!
Great read!

[Destiny Dreamer]

Yeah absolutely ^_^ THANK YOU :)

[BougaTimeBongo]

Hi Dreamer,
I'm already seeing a difference in your work. It shows that you are learning more about grammar and sentence structure - I'm so pleased! This is a lovely poem, again, you have such a sweet voice that comes across that it's hard not to smile at your work. Like usual, I've gone through and made some edits for grammar. I've put ** wherever the edits are so you know what I've done. :)

In Her Garden,
Under her favorite Tree
They were sitting, Yeah completely free
**Care of no worries that life brings (I think I know what you mean to say here, but it's a little confused. If you are saying that you don't care about the worries that life brings, I would change it to say "No cares of the worries that life brings)
It was the season of beautiful Spring
He was holding Her hand
They were no longer just friends
She was staring in His eyes,
and were dreaming in disguise

Yeah, it's a beautiful, beautiful love story
Not** tragic, no worries**
No, there is no need to be sorry** (I would substitute 'there is no need to be sorry' with 'there is no need for apologies' as it would maintain the rhyme scheme you have, but would add a bit more richness to your vocabulary)
'cause the stars are shining in their eyes
The wind **blowing in their face
The raindrops are making them raise
They've never been so high,
they even wanna fly** (Do they want to fly, or do they feel like they could fly? Just something to think about)
Yeah, it's a beautiful, beautiful love story

He holds** Her hand tight,
asking with fright, "How much do You love me?"
She stared at the Rain drops, and asked **him to count
He said, "I can't it's an infinite amount**"
She grinned** and said, "My love is infinity"
Yeah, infinity, infinity, divinity
He stared in Her eyes, saw** dreams in disguise

It's a beautiful, beautiful love story
Not** tragic, no worries**
No, there is no need for apologies**
'cause now they are holding each other's hands
Loving, wishing, dreaming in their own crowned** land (I'm not sure what you mean by crowned land, do you mean maybe a land of their own? If so, you could say something to the effect of 'dreaming in their own private land' or something like that. If you say what you mean, then nevermind me!)
He is singing for Her in a beautiful melody
She is happy 'cause she's found Her love already
They are Dancing in the cool breeze, smelling the Rain
Caring for no one as they strain** (strain isn't fitting here - strain implies that something is hard and I think you want something that reads that they are breezy, light, worry free. I'm not sure what you can replace it with, but it's something to work on)
It's the most** beautiful, beautiful Love story
EVER TOLD!

[Destiny Dreamer]

Thanks A lot ... Thanks for Your encouraging words.. It's all because of You. You are always helping. I really adore it. So, what do You think I should use in place of "Strain" Please help!

[BougaTimeBongo]

I can't tell you what to use instead of strain, since it is your poem and the sentiment you need to get across is yours, but I can direct you to use a rhyming dictionary...I use Rhyme Zone.... http://www.rhymezone.com/ And you type in the word you want to rhyme with, and it will give you single, double, triple syllable words that rhyme. I do that when I'm stuck and I need an inspiration. Sometimes you stumble across a rhyming word that automatically triggers some idea. :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

OH Yup.. I too use it sometimes. I will find it there :) Thanks :)

[BougaTimeBongo]

No problemo!

[~]

A lovely piece. I liked the giddy feelings the poem brought about while reading it. And who does not like happy endings? :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

Awwww Shoo Shweet of You.. Thanks :* :* :*

[~]

you are welcome :) please no tears :):)

[Destiny Dreamer]

^_^ ^_^ :))) Love YA! :)

[~]

well.. thank you :)

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

I like it, it's romantic, it's very beatiful. Thanks for sharing

[Destiny Dreamer]

Aww You are WELCOME! ^_^ Thanks for giving me Your precious Time!

[Isabel25]

This is a very cute love poem dreamer. You indeed sound like a Dreamer. Good one :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

Thank You so much .... :* It's very nice to hear this! :)