Guess I should be more broken hearted

Sometimes, it just doesn't mean as much as it should.

I guess I shoud be more heart broken

Maybe I should grovel a bit?

Maybe I should slander her name

But I can't help but be done with this s**t.

 

Maybe I should have left you with curses

Or slapped you in the face.

Maybe wallowed in chocalate and liquer

But that will not be the case.

 

Yes, your touch was tender

Yes it gave me chills

Yes I moaned and groaned

With your  ills and wills

Yes I wanted more

Yes I ached for less

And I should have held on tighter

To your sweet caress.

 

But I'm movin on honey,

I can't waste no tears.

I'll miss the sweet kisses

And the dreams of years

But I'm movin on baby

I don't have no time

Sunshine and some guys

Aren't waiting in line

I got fishin to do love

I got baiting and throwin

Those back in the sea

Who don't fit the throne.

(That I place next to me)

 

Guess I should be more broken hearted

But you meant nothing to me

I see that I meant nothing to you

So don't dare try and shoot the breeze.

Reviews

[S-W-E-E-T-S]

So strong! Sounds like you've got your head on top of your shoulders keep it that way, don't let them bring you down!

[{Angel Redd}[Formerly A..]

Couldn't have said it better myself. You captured exactly the attitude that I wish I had the strength to possess.

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

Very good write! I like the strength and stance you take here!
Love hurts a lot! It's very hard to get over, but you do it with power and still a vulnerability
that's endearing and allows me to sway back & forth through this piece.
Very good write......

[Xeru]

Extremely powerful and poised in its allowance to experience what love has to offer and then recover so quickly to know...I got baiting and throwin

"Those back in the sea

Who don't fit the throne.

(That I place next to me)"

It wasnt the typical scorn joint... It held its own on some adult ish... Highly respectable piece right here. Realistic but not overly condemning. A reevaluation of the emotional facts and the actualization of knowing it wasnt right. I"m feeling your style for sure. Great write mami

[Thug Life]

wow! this was, honestly AMAZIN!! i love the subtle anger you put in this. sensed it but u didnt make it lainly obvious lol if that makes sense. imma have 2 add this to my library. im in love wit this write! the reference to fishin was genius! im blown away as i stated.. excellent!