Frustrated

Frustrated

Frustration
I'm always trying to run to better
And once I get there
I've still to run to best

Frustrated
When I'm doing my best to make it
And once I've made it
I've still to make something else

Frustrates me
I've want all that I've wanted
Once I've got it all
Can't help but want something more

Frustrating
Getting where I need to be
Cause once I'm there
Not sure what I'm there for

Reviews

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

Bravo!!!! You've captured the human essence that we all possess! We are a being of constant upgrade! That poem of mine that you just finished reading is a perfect example of that mentality! We love "it" new until something else new comes along. In all phases! I was so happy with my big screen 46 inch TV, until they released the 64 flat screen high def with the NFL package and adjustable mount and.....sorry, sorry. Back to your poem....Great write and I can feel the frustration exude through your words....

[Greg Skura]

Desirelessness cures frustration! Love your poem! Thank You for sharing!

[Voice]

Great poem. As humans we are always saying if I had this then id be happy and when we get it we only want more. Or we say when I have reached this point in my life then everything will be better only to ask when we get there what was the point. A very eye opening piece thanks for sharing�

Voice

[Wildecat]

I think that most of us feel the same way as you do. Loved this poem.

[Ella Emergency]

oh!
heartbreak in a few short lines
i feel that so much

[Charles D. Moorer]

That is the human condition. Otis Redding said it best, I can't get no satisfaction, but I tried and I tried.

[Lyrical Love]

I concur with the Bridge!
This is an excellent write of our mere existence as we meander through life!
Frustrating
Getting where I need to be
Cause once I'm there
Not sure what I'm there for

[Mobius]

Thanks for the constructive criticism on my Drunken Butterfly story. I dont know why I feel the need to repeat myself so often. I guess to keep things as simple as possible and keep the readers from falling asleep. Obvioulsy, you are more sophisticated. (Or maybe, you just drink more coffee than most)

I liked your poem. There will always be a star higher than the one we are reaching for. No matter how tall we stand, we will always seem like mice as we look in the mirror. We will never see but one side of the coin that is us.