Forest FireA Poem by Farrah GrahmIn this haze from a long burning forest fire
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Tell me what you think! Don't spare my feelings [poetry's not one of my strengths]
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I really like the aspects here, the form and wording read like a story and the emotion felt like poetry,
this works well as spoken word and allows the heart to connect to the meaning in execution and skill for deriving clear imagery and refined detail, beautifully written. Posted 15 Years Ago |
This is so beautiful and delicate. This is originality at it's best, it also gave me a rush of emotion. I've never been into poems, but this is definitely worth it and I am impressed by every line of it.
Posted 15 Years Ago |
this reminds me of Lost when lovers get seperated and their worlds are transformed and mutilated and they are more alone then they ever have been
the only thing i'd say is that it didn't rhyme but poetry doesn't have to Posted 15 Years Ago |
If Poetry isnt your strength then I would love to see what is. This was a write that spoke to me personally. I can't wait for more.
Posted 15 Years Ago |
"Poetry's not one of my strengths," well you could have fooled me. Great imagery, and very original. I love the idea of a forest fire, moss on the wrong side of the trees is what won me over though. Originality is so important, and you nailed it! Good style too.
Posted 15 Years Ago |
Here I am thinking this will be a triumph story of you saving your lover's life as the world is coming to an end, and of course in perfect Alanis Morssette and/or Mary J. Blige fashion, it's about him not loving you anymore. Clap, clap.....
Climb in my car and drove toward the fire Foot pressed the gas with no fear of being burned Hard to breathe, but I keep going I need to be near you, I need you more than ever Cradle my aching heart, Soothe my racing mind Everything's wrong, the world's up side down Only your embrace, your quiet words Can alleviate this earth's malady. Your attention to detail is uncanny! I enjoy the story I read, but here, without having the time to go into extensive detail, you go into a mad rush of emotions and descriptions that were very entertaining. I was saying "Drive baby drive! Find him! Save him!" Very great write! Posted 15 Years Ago |
Luv Luv Luv!
entirely out of their elements. This was a trilling warmharted pillow, another moment to be, but I hope: Someone asks. It was more than lines...it was a seduction. (to read more.)I Posted 15 Years Ago |
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Added on February 5, 2009Last Updated on March 2, 2009
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Farrah Grahm
Miledgeville, GA
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