last letters

silent, was your last letter.
wrinkled page, forced to straight.
I read the dance of your pen on it, full of ache,
and swirls were blue and blurr.

I wrote my last letter, i bleed.
edge of page, stained with blood.
but the well inside my eyes drowned me under,
unreaching to you.
With the whispers I wrote, full of screams.

Reviews

[Laconic Meraki]

This literally gave me chills.
(In a good way.)
💜

[Farhan Shaikh]

thanks! glad you liked it

[Laconic Meraki]

I loved it.

[Taniska 😊€..]

It's short but so much touchy love it . Keep writing (smiles) ^-^

[Farhan Shaikh]

thank you 😇

[Taniska 😊😊]

My pleasure ^ ^

[Gaurav]

It can be one of those letters where love dies because of lastness of it...the way you have summarized it all seems to depict the beauty of end...good one

[Farhan Shaikh]

thank you 😇

[Coyote Poetry]

The last letter. Rarely sweet. I liked these words. Heart breaking and true emotions bleed to paper. Thank you Farhan for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Farhan Shaikh]

thanks for the time

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[wordman]

still crying out for one more moment

[Farhan Shaikh]

🙏🙌.......

[Ethel]

"Within the whispers...full of scream". Very beautiful. You're doing well

[Farhan Shaikh]

thank you dear 😇

[Kimiko Watson]

Wow, this speaks so much volume. I love it.

[Farhan Shaikh]

thank you ma'am 😇

[Pragati Chaudhary]

That's a beautiful Poem. I loved it :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

thank you 😇