I believe, all of us are different. We see and want different things. Some people can live in paradise and they can see the beauty of the sea and the forest. I liked the poem. Honest thoughts, made the reader ponder and think. Thank you Farhan for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Ohhhh such a terrible blow to suffer...I’ll never understand this...maybe it just wasn’t meant to be...I say sometimes I was a lesson to be learn...but I got hurt helping ppl learn...life is never easy...well written🌹
This is an amazing short poetry I ever read . The lines are so touching . I just loved Show them the rainbow
they'll go colour blind. Keep writing and keep smiling always 😊😊
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I especially love V1 becuz it is a creative & relatable way to describe how some people do not see us & do nothing to sustain our hearts. Your poem sounds accepting of how this disappointment goes, not so much complaining about unfairness or heartbreak, but it feels like the narrator is warning someone else to be realistic & see how someone who is not right should be let go (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
I believe, all of us are different. We see and want different things. Some people can live in paradise and they can see the beauty of the sea and the forest. I liked the poem. Honest thoughts, made the reader ponder and think. Thank you Farhan for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote