Now you see me

Same old sky

But the stars are new,

Like a brightest one

I'm looking at you.

I wonder if you see me too 

You may go far

Saying no goodbye,

I'll keep looking for you.

Untill we are beneath

the same sky, i wish

you'll see me too.

With your half smile you 

Walk away from me, 

half your smile is due.

You may tilt your eyes

But this time i caught them,

And Now you see me too.

                                            

Reviews

[Cara]

Well written, thank you for sharing

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the cleverness of the words Farhan.
"You may tilt your eyes
But this time i caught them,
And Now you see me too"
The above lines were my favorite. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Oh how i wonder as well where that certain person is do they see us do they want to find us- are we all just lost stars? Wonderful- i hope they see you and find you - i hope we all find the place our hearts call home🌹

[Priyanshi]

This poem brought a smile to me...I enjoyed reading it.
:))

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you priyanshi

[poetgurl]

Such a wonderful write here, I really enjoyed this

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you 😄

[Haniya]

Well done! I think that you did a great job comparing people to stars. I loved it!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you 😄

[barleygirl]

I like the way you use "stars" as a metaphor for the way this world is full of people & how we meet someone in a completely different part of the world, almost as if it's not even under the same stars, & so many of the friendships that are formed these days follow this kind of wandering spirit of being just two stars in a huge sky full of stars. I love the way your poem subtly addresses how we often never meet in person, even tho we become very close friends thru the ether. Beautiful scene to show all these ordinary friendship issues in modern life (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much

[Najam Us Saher]

I love reading about stars, this is very descriptive and heart touching. Very nice words.

[Farhan Shaikh]

I'm glad you enjoyed

[Onlyme]

Sweet sentiments when you miss someone who is not close by. Heartfelt and sincere.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Yeah.. thanks for the time

[wordman]

sweet sentiment my friend,this has been the way we see each other when we`re apart

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you Mr. Wordman

[wordman]

you`re welcome