Fading away

It's been a while,

Yet i can't see in your eyes.

The sky is turning to grey

So i am fading away.

I hope you knocked

On my door, and I'd

bring all the stars on my floor.

But now you're walking away, 

and Somewhere I'm gone astray.

I'd bring the heart of ocean 

to wish you happy birthday,

Even if i had to travel seaways,

But you wished for a perfect midday,

So now I'm paddling away.

Reviews

[Erudite]

Good poem, i like how concise your metaphors are

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you for your time