Midnight Memories

To the seashore in the midnight

but the ocean's raging in me inside.

moon is reflecting on the seaside

and you're with him on the other side.

I can see those stars

which you named after us

yours twinkiling by my side

i wish you were here to see.

All of our memories were fading

i put em in the bottle, now they're sailing

i hope at least once it will reach you

so you can know that i wanna feel you, right by my side.

i can smell the fragrance of yours

when the wind touches my skin

Can Stand by the shore?

and let the waves touch your feet.

I shed my tears in the ocean

they're glistening and swimming with the motion

like a firefly, if you see them

they'll show how much i love you, if you feel them.

listen to your heart and see

The way our skylines meet

every route you will take will lead

Beneath these stars with me.

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

The sheer knock of imagery here is enough to get the reader to jump down the rabbit hole as it were, brilliant and timeless, well done, good read.

[Davidgeo]

To my mind, this intertwines the science's and emotion quite nicely. Very impressive on multiple levels... well done.

[Sneh]

How pretty the imageries are ... this deep love needs deep understanding ....dude, you have done a great job! 😺

[richieb]

Heartfelt poem. Much yearning and longing for lost love. You created good imagery to show the desperation and pain in your words. Truly felt your words.
Blessings,
Richie b.

[LKBillips]

No matter how far away we share the same sky and stars. Those different patterns they all connect. I like this idea that you could reach them through that idea. Like Fievel from American Tail. lol.

[Gaurav]

your words deeply reaches the agonies of the heart and perfectly embrace it. A good work there friend :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks for the review Gaurav

[AllauraRose]

I can feel the heartbreak. I am so sorry, I know it can be painful, I have never experienced one regarding a romantic partner, but one from the loss of a friend. You will get over it eventually, but if you need to cry, cry. If you need to scream, scream. I wish you the best of luck! Great job!

[Farhan Shaikh]

I do look good smiling, ahahh! Thanks for your time and review 😄

[Anjali]

Incredible! This is so beautiful.... I don't have words to express how amazing and wonderful it is! Keep it up!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks so much Anjali

[Anjali]

You're welcome!

[¿]

Poem of the day for me!
Pity to the girl who's left the poetic soul (to the character)....
Every stanza is filled with mesmerising emotions...touched the heart...Great read! :》

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much😄

[wordman]

loss of love can be devastating ,loved the write

[Farhan Shaikh]

True, thanks for the review

[wordman]

you`re welcome