In her dreams

It's 5.am and my eyes were still open

thinking about you, wondering if you're dreaming of me.

if we both dancing in the dark

or lying beneath the stars in the park.

tell me if i'm taking you to the clouds

far away from all these crowd

to be together we both vowed.

tell me babe, if we are the best of all

and we're breaking all the walls

that was in between of us.

tell me you're looking in my eyes

and seeing your universe inside me 

and whisper your words to me

and i'm only one for you now and ever 

and you're leaving me, never.

want you to hold my hand

take me to neverland,

and kiss you in the wonderland.

so if you're dreaming all of me

wake up little late

let us get joined by the fate

enough of being just mates

let me be your soulmate.

Reviews

[Zoya]

Philosophy says there are chances that if you find yourself thinking about someone, the same person is thinking about you, too...that'd be like an accomplishment for you, wouldn't it!
Wonderful poem! Loved it, the ending especially!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Hehe... thanks for the review by the way

[Zoya]

No worries

[Meshalini]

So beautiful. Love the way you wrote it.
Well done.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks for the review

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

The anguish mixed with fantasy and longing, breaks through to the reader, well done, good read.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thankyou mr.Thomas

[HeyJadeXO]

I am a big fan of Disney so the reference to wonderland and never land really helped me connect with the overall feel of the piece great work !

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks Jade😄

[grayscale]

The heart wants as it does and the pain of want hurt even into the physical relm.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks for the time

[wordman]

i guess we just always wonder don`t we,we just have to know so our hearts are settled

[Farhan Shaikh]

Yep Mr.wordman

[Coyote Poetry]

Kind, hopeful and wonderful use of words.
"let us get joined by the fate
enough of being just mates
let me be your soulmate."
I liked the above lines. Fate must be overtook. Fearless people taste the sweetness of love. Thank you Farban for sharng the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks for reading it😄

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[zaisham9393]

Beautiful! I enjoyed reading this :)!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you Zaisham

[Anjali]

'want you to hold my hand
take me to neverland,
and kiss you in the wonderland.'
I loved these lines so much! and the ending, it was beautiful.... very dreamy and illusional... I really really liked it.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you Anjali

[Anjali]

You're welcome!

[Najam Us Saher]

Dreamy and passionate. I loved the honest tone throughout the poem, wonderfully well written. I liked the imagination you have described.

[Farhan Shaikh]

I'm glad you like it....😄

[Najam Us Saher]

I am glad you remember not to mention thanks. 😀

[Farhan Shaikh]

Hehe...I remember