In her dreams

It's 5.am and my eyes were still open

thinking about you, wondering if you're dreaming of me.

if we both dancing in the dark

or lying beneath the stars in the park.

tell me if i'm taking you to the clouds

far away from all these crowd

to be together we both vowed.

tell me babe, if we are the best of all

and we're breaking all the walls

that was in between of us.

tell me you're looking in my eyes

and seeing your universe inside me 

and whisper your words to me

and i'm only one for you now and ever 

and you're leaving me, never.

want you to hold my hand

take me to neverland,

and kiss you in the wonderland.

so if you're dreaming all of me

wake up little late

let us get joined by the fate

enough of being just mates

let me be your soulmate.

Reviews

[LKBillips]

I like the ideas of this, the rhymes were a little forced in areas but it has beautiful sentiments.

[Harley Quinn]

I enjoy reading this poem. Thanks for sharing. Can't wait to read more of your writing.

[Fahmida Mehreen]

"so if you're dreaming all of me
wake up little late
let us get joined by the fate
enough of being just mates
let me be your soulmate."

Heart touchy and romantic. :)

[Tabby Mac]

Beautiful! Reminds me of my first-love days! Absolutely beautiful, deep and heartfelt! Well done! Soulmates are real.
Tabby

[Priyanshi]

Hey, A lovely poetry it is.... reading it was like wishing that it never finish.....
so kind and thoughtful lines u included in between.... afterall loved the poem

[Haniya]

Farhan,
You always get me in everything that you write. I feel as if a special someone was writing this for me, and it truly provokes the right amount of emotion from pulling at your own heartstrings.
Very well done, my man!

Haniya

[richieb]

Farhan,
I love the essence of your poem but the rhyming sequences do not work for me. I think they take away from the maturity of your write. This is certainly constructive criticism as I respect your talents and efforts.
Peace,
Richie b.

[Farhan Shaikh]

I understand Richie... thanks for the help

[Donicca Dona L]

so beautiful written . you never stop amazing me with your work. thank you so much for writing.

[Farhan Shaikh]

It means a lot Donicca😄

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Awesome words reminded me of Peter Pan and Tinkerbrll- fly away with me- wonderful and free and the wanting if true love that never ends- all is possible if you believe just beautiful🌹

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much

[Suhd]

A nice attempt. Consider revision.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much😄