The Dark World

It's been a while

I haven't seen the dawn

I remember old myself

When the sunshine's gone.

I don't know what to do

I don't know where to go.

I'm stuck in this night

For a really long time

There's no one to see

There's no one to talk

Wondering when will I

Stop my lonely walk.

When the rays will

hit into my eyes.?

When will once again

I'll be in the light?

These streets still haunts me

These trees still flaunts me.

I tried to aid but 

I'm still bleeding

Closed my eyes but 

I'm not sleeping.

Tears streaming down from my face

Lost something that i can't replace.

I know I'm full of wounds

But still I stand

These scars on my body

Makes me cry in strand.

Yes i hit the bottom 

But it's not lasting.

Yes I'm knocked down

But I'm not yet pinned

I can see the sky

Without any stars

Only moon up there

With loads of scars.

Ocean here without any waves

Mountains here having no caves

A River taking me nowhere

Flivver I found everywhere.

Maybe I'm staying here 

Or maybe I'll get through

I rather use a comma

Than to use full stop.

Maybe this will hurt me 

But I'm always going 

to be me.

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

One always must brave the anguish to get to the core of being, well done, good read.

[wordman]

sometimes we must go through some pain,but it goes away

[Vasilees Sybissyl]

Beautiful poem. One can feel all the pain and understand the darkness. Great work!

Love,
Vasilees.

[kristelescapades]

Your lines oozes to a reader's emotion.

[Najam Us Saher]

You took me on a journey when I felt such. The words you wrote are relatable and I could feel your emotions such was the honesty in your emotions. The darkness you feel is clearly expressed.

[Irenic]

the poem paints a blur image of PAIN and MELANCHOLY and the key point is there is soothing rhythm in this beautiful piece. there is only need of building vocabulary and reading poems.
Thank you for sharing painted-with-words image of PAIN. :)