The last note

Ain't anyone found me in the teared shirt,

Cause I've been treated like dirt,

How do I move from this dark desert

The hell so much I'm hurt.

I needed them but they don't,

It's like their heart made of stone.

They all wanna sit on the throne

and threw me on the hell zone.

Spoke words that doesn't made sense

Ain't anyone was in my defense.

Was on my knees and pleading

Show some mercy I'm bleeding.

Put my shoes on your feet

Try to feel what it's like to be me.

They thought I was a piece of joke

They didn't thought that I'm broke

Meanwhile i walk home through the smoke

and they were like "oh look that crazy folk"

If I'm anyone of them 

I would've tried to end this painful fire.

Looked up at the fan and the chair down

Tied up the rope making the end of a clown.

Goodbye note I penned

"MOM, here my story ends".

Reviews

[Joey Nizz]

What a lovely poem Farhan, glad to see see your work again :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks so much Joey

[Joey Nizz]

Your welcome buddy :)

[bela]

beautiful poem!! I like it very much.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks bela

[Vasilees Sybissyl]

This is so sad and touching! The last lines,

Goodbye note I penned
"MOM, here my story ends".

are my favourite. What inspired you to write this? You've conveyed the feelings - so crystal clear - it's admirable. Keep it up!

Love,
Vasilees

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks so much for your time

[Farhan Shaikh]

As I titled it as a last note so everyone person who take these kind of steps...mother will be the last thing they would like to think about or speak

[Priyanshi]

Poem is amazing...and well weaved it....you wrote it wonderfully...obviously a sad poem, but really loved it.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you priyanshi

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure.

[wordman]

certaily a sad place to be,lonely and hurt

[Farhan Shaikh]

Yep.. thanks for your time

[pia]

Really heart touching and amazing !!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks so much Pia

[Haniya]

Dang, very breathtakingly melancholy. I like it, though. Good job!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks Hanu

[Tony Jordan]

The hardening of the heart is a contagion. When one gets it they either end the strain (as here) or they pass it on - tis more noble to end the strain but such heartbreak is left behind.
Heartwrenching!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks for your precious time buddy

[Najam Us Saher]

The end hits really hard. I liked the rhyme and the way you managed very well to make the readers feel your situation.
In the third line it should be 'desert' not dessert.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Oh thank you so much najam

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.

[Anjali]

Amazing! It's so beautiful.... I loved it! Keep it up.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks so much Anjali

[Anjali]

You are welcome!