The last note

Ain't anyone found me in the teared shirt,

Cause I've been treated like dirt,

How do I move from this dark desert

The hell so much I'm hurt.

I needed them but they don't,

It's like their heart made of stone.

They all wanna sit on the throne

and threw me on the hell zone.

Spoke words that doesn't made sense

Ain't anyone was in my defense.

Was on my knees and pleading

Show some mercy I'm bleeding.

Put my shoes on your feet

Try to feel what it's like to be me.

They thought I was a piece of joke

They didn't thought that I'm broke

Meanwhile i walk home through the smoke

and they were like "oh look that crazy folk"

If I'm anyone of them 

I would've tried to end this painful fire.

Looked up at the fan and the chair down

Tied up the rope making the end of a clown.

Goodbye note I penned

"MOM, here my story ends".

Reviews

[April Blue]

Wow, I really love the way the words flow together.. Great emotion in every line..

[Karen Redburn]

The word speak volumes of a soul crying in pain. This literally broke my heart as I read it. If only we could take the words of your brutally honest poem and get the world to understand, bullying can kill beautiful souls. Excellent and honest poem!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you very much miss.Karen..

[Voice]

You've delivered a very strong message. Gonna be a part of my favourites for sure. Well done!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks for that...😄

[Voice]

You're welcome :)

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

A superb poignant poem in impressive rhyming. Appealing and expresses so well. Thumbs up young poet.


Soo nice to read from u again, pls comment/review my newest poem too, would like your thoughts on It too, , on suicide.

[Sonakshi Arora]

Farhan I really appreciate this poem. I can see the emotions transcend in this poetry and the feelings with which you've authored this. Bullying is a big problem in today's world and a stigma and there has to be an end to it. Lovely write! Keep it up .
I love when people write on social causes :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much

[Karmee]

Wow, This is so good, Bullying is horrible. I was bullied, I enjoyed this write.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much

[heartspeaks]

Urgghhh!!!! Why did you write this!!!.... Got me goosebumps... Sorry... By why did you write ... I was actually carried away by the emotion... 😅. ... Your subject is so strong and amazing... Bullying is something that has to stop... Well... I loved the poem... But it did made me sad😑... Hate you for that... Great job... Keep on writing... So good to read a familiar writers work after so long... Thanks for writing... Good luck Farhan

[Farhan Shaikh]

Haha! Sorry for making you sad... but I feel thanks is in order

[heartspeaks]

I loved this peice

[Taino]

You can feel the intense emotion, the pain, a sense of hopelessness and frustration. You can tell this came from deep inside you. You did a very good job expressing yourself!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you..

[KCthelastboyscout]

Sad to read.I hope encouragement finds you quickly.